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The Glass Door Swung Open Wide
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The Glass Door Swung Open Wide |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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The Glass Door Swung Open Wide The glass door swung open wide an open novel on the other side, years of waiting to be just read left dangling like a loose thread. An open novel on the other side never left a secret place to hide, wanting only a chance to shine every mountain a steep decline. Years of waiting to be just read left constant loneliness instead, long days of restless solitude developed sadness in attitude. Left dangling like a loose thread a personality dissolved in dread waiting for the time in life to ride the glass door swung open wide. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Dreamer, this is excellent. You adhered to the form flawlessly...and the words are excellent. Very impressive. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow Gloria, I really like what you did with this one. Nice format you choose to display your words in  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is excellent, Gloria!! Well done! Denise |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Thank You all very much, I had fun putting this one together. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Well done, Gloria! I'm telling you... I have really seen you grow so much in your writing just within the past couple of months! This is a keeper! Nice work! |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Doreen: Thank You very much for your kind compliments. |
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