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Open Poetry #6

why dance with a hero

infinat3 sadn3ss
Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 85
somerset england

0 posted 2000-03-10 06:21 AM

Dont you go with him ,
he only has his ego ,
but i cant really judge ,
i dont exactly have the wings of an eagle.

He doesnt look into your eyes ,
and never gasps in utter surprise.

Dont dance with him , he is a hero
why have him when you can have a zero .
He doesnt know you or understand ,
he just wants to hold your hand ,
but dont get me wrong , thats what i want to do ,
i want to glance inside of you too .

so you see , that you can dance with him .
Just make sure you come back to me

[This message has been edited by infinat3 sadn3ss (edited 03-10-2000).]

mete out
Member

since 2000-02-16

Posts 270
england

1 posted 2000-03-10 06:41 AM

***Cabes,
Oh how I love this one...the 1st full poem you ever showed me...nostalgia at it's finest!
I love where this one came from too...

"B.L.O.N...Oh...whatever!"

all mine,
lou xxx

Thinker
New Member

since 2000-03-06

Posts 8

2 posted 2000-03-13 06:07 AM

Great work Cabes,
I don't get how people like you and Louise can get emotions down on paper, but you do it amazingly well.
Great poem.
Don't forget there are people here for you to talk to.
Ryan.

To think is a right
To know is to be too sure of your own exsistance

PEACEMAKER
Junior Member

since 2000-03-11

Posts 19
Sydney N.S.W Australia

3 posted 2000-03-13 06:52 AM

loved it, had me thinking after ever line
can't wait till i read your next

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