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Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2000-03-09 08:53 PM

I'm lost here without you,
Though I know we've never touched.
Knowing where to find you,
Has been my comfort and my trust.

The comfort in your baratone,
Has soothed me right to sleep.
Even in your confusion,
In your heart I've had a peek.

No contact is there possible,
For 21 whole days.
I go around absently,
Lost in a total haze.

Tell me what this really means,
This missing you I feel?
Have I really lost my mind,
Or just missing my last meal?

Is this love or just a dream?
I've built my world upon.
Are you right there missing me,
As this time moves on?

First__Knight
Senior Member

since 1999-11-08

Posts 678

1 posted 2000-03-09 09:07 PM

Oh my Lady Marilyn,

Trust me when I say that anyone who knows you.....and has not spoken to you in a while.....YES....they miss you. I truly believe that. No doubt in my mind...so let there be no doubt in yours.

There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it.

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

2 posted 2000-03-09 09:14 PM

Marilyn, what a yearning poem ! Gee, girl some strong emotions here. Liked it a lot how you translated this feeling into words

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-03-09 10:03 PM

Marilyn~

Longingly lovely.
This should reach out and touch him.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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busylisa_ca
Junior Member

since 2000-03-01

Posts 39

4 posted 2000-03-09 10:04 PM

Just remember, "absence makes the heart grow fonder"

beautiful poem.

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 2000-03-09 10:52 PM

A lot of emotion on display here, Marilyn. Missing someone is one of the strongest of feelings.

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

6 posted 2000-03-10 08:03 AM

David....You are so sweet.

Thankyou for your words of encouragement, they mean a lot to me.

Munda...Thankyou.

Marge...I do hope it touches him. He knows how I feel. I am just unsure if he returns those feelings. That is the difficult part of it. I know he cares but as deeply as I do?

busylisa....I do hope so.

Dear One....You are very right with that statement.

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