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Ouch (or... The Return of the Bane)
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Ouch (or... The Return of the Bane) |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Pain does return, I cannot spurn, Insidious pain, O' curs'ed bane. I feared pain not, But I forgot, Such agony, "blank" cavity. To tooth beseech, Would use a leach, To lift your curse, Pain can't be worse. To dentist go, Tell tale of woe, Sharp needle first, Now which hurts worst? X-rays taken, Drill's a shakin' Tooth's done capped, With bill, I'm tapped. I head away, Hear dentist say, Advice from me, To stay pain free. A gift to use, To rid pain's blues, To me does toss, Transcendental floss. A follow-up to the very nearly legendary "Bane of Pain" |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
LOL....wonderful. I'm going to call you Bill from now on...for this is surely something William Shakespeare would have written. You've done a marvelous job with this!  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is not a laughing matter...but your bane has got me insane and the floss I'm at a loss, to come across with a reply ...poor baby! You must feel better, else how would you have written such a clever poem? |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Eewww OUCH. This was not what I was expecting when I opened it! LOL You gave me the willies reading this...(shivering still & flinching) Er....very....um....interesting! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
I have more silver in my mouth than a table service for eight... thanks for comments... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is delightful, Mike!  Denise |
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