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| Open Poetry #6 |
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The Stillness |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
The StillnessThere's no resting now for the wicked, Or so the old adages say I must have committed a murderous crime To remain wide awake in this way My thoughts soon befall to your gifting Your friendship, your words and your art And how in but few and such settling sunsets Your warmth has uncovered my heart So many events yet unspoken Of all that our lives have entailed But no hurry is felt in tonight's wandering thoughts As I savor each morsel unveiled And with now drowsy sighs of our sharing My eyes seem to know how to close I just needed to ease them with visions of you And the stillness that loving you knows.  Claire |
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MyPenNameIsSam Member
since 2000-03-06
Posts 94usa |
I love this! It's beautiful!  Yes! I relate so much to this! I love it! Beautifully worded as well! "Always be willing to sacrifice what you believe, for the truth."-jps |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Claire~ So lovely. 'But no hurry is felt in tonight's wandering thoughts' The wonder is where your thoughts did wander. Beautiful. ~*Marge* ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Claire~ this left me feeling warm! -SEA |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Very soothing and warm, embracing words, which are not easy to do. JML |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is positively wonderful! So loving and peaceful.  |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
This is beautiful. Dream on. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful Clair. Where can one find this peace? |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Exquisite. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Claire, your wakefullness was not just for thoughts of love, for you created this marvelous poem that pleases me. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Thank you, all, for reading this. To know that you found something to enjoy in this poem is quite encouraging. Thank you for telling me. ~ Claire |
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