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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
There are moments that are Frozen like ice in our mind And we come to realize That we’re only cheating time Nothing is real Nothing stays the same Everything changes And life gets rearranged Now I didn’t ask for euthanasia But that is all I can find My only hope remaining Is not to be left behind Don’t want to face the day The night destroys the brightness Of the day before With its cool, silent kiss The fears of taking a chance And losing, lead to desperation While memories of the good times Always adds something to the equation Hope |
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MyPenNameIsSam Member
since 2000-03-06
Posts 94usa |
Are you sure we're cheating time? or is time simply a perception that's irrelevant, like distance? sorry... I s'pose most people don't look at it like that. heh  Well written, JML. I liked this poem very much -molly aka sam |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JML~ Hope is a powerful thing. Hold onto it.(it's rather slippery  ) Great poem! -SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
There are moments that are Frozen like ice in our mind And we come to realize That we’re only cheating time Nothing is real Nothing stays the same Everything changes And life gets rearranged Now I didn’t ask for euthanasia (deep)  But that is all I can find My only hope remaining Is not to be left behind" this one reads like a song to me...get your guitar and sing it for me...  stalking you still, your jm you're really alone at last... you're bored and fading fast, if it's true you'll fall from the past all you'll have to do is ask you'll feel but never be you want and always need price you pay for wanting to see will you have all you've ever dreamed... robin wilson |
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