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To Give Thee My Love
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To Give Thee My Love |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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What shall I offer thee? The roses of a garden in bloom, To give thee my love, I shall sing sweet tunes, A lovers lullaby, To our loves melody, To answer thy hearts faint cry, For the sun shines brightly upon your hair, Mine eyes are captured by your lenghthy stare, The trees, They shadow thy face, Thy heart is humbled by your grace, What shall I offer thee my love? A token, of words passionately spoken, Thy bittersweet tears in a bottle, To give thee my love, I offer no more, no less, A love truest of trues, One of deepest joy that knows no sorrow, I offer thee this journey, this romantic quest, For thy soul speaks softly, Without a shout, but a whisper Thy heart feels thy soul around thee, As the warmth of the sun upon thy skin, Thy heart is in thy hands, For thee alone, no mortal does not understand, Thy earthly kingdoms will fall all around thee, For thy kingdom is only your love, Never shall it be over-thrown, Nor cast into the deep seas, For thy love, thy words has captured me, Thy heart has wings of butterflies, It dreams, dreams where angels sleep, Where fairies trod to love for keep, For thee my love, Thy heart shall I keep, Whatever thou love bestows, Thy love shall overcome, For thy heart weeps till morning, Morning to night, Thou is lost in dreams, Dreaming dreams of loves' flight, What shall I give thee my love? Thy heart, thy soul, thy flesh, Thy dreams, thy life, thy death, Even thy last breath? Whatever is ask of thee, I would endure ten thousand pains, Travel near or far, Follow any star, To give thee thy love, "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, RH! Simply beautiful! Sounds like love to me! Denise |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
A song of nightingale from forth her lips doth flow, Enjoyed your poetry fair maiden. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Dee as always you make my day! Thanks for your inspiration and encouragement,most of all your friendship!  Sir Mike, thou knowest thee well,from the lips of the nightingale...Tweet, tweet! "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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AngelDust Junior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 30Minnesota |
Very nicely writen! I especialy like your use of the middle English words (Thy, thee, ect..) Great job Love it here at Passions! Thanks for writing so much good reading material guys! -Angel- |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
this was so romantic and I just wanted it to go on forever. well done Tracie Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Welcome angeldust...like your name! You will enjoy this family of poets, glad to have you on board!!! Thanks Tracie, welcome too! I haven't been on in awhile, alot of new poets here! Thank you! Happy to have you here! I look forward toreading both of your poetry! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
A Romantic Heart, you are truly a gifted writer. William would be proud, and probably flirting with you..... Whatever is ask of thee, I would endure ten thousand pains, Travel near or far, Follow any star, To give thee thy love, ........ Do you own a car, and can you follow these road map directions.  Parker |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
yes I own a car, can travel near or far, I think WILLIAM IS flirting with me! My hair is naturally raven,hehe!I have always wanted to vacation in Ireland! As a WHITE ROSE PETAL,or as a OCEAN,maybe a FLOWER or ROSE!< !signature--> "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 03-09-2000).] |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Parker: Road map directions to where? I have already been to your home page and I have read all your poems. Loved them! "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Passion truly runs over in this......I am fully moved by your words of giving and desire. Romance at the peak I would say |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
As always, thank you first knight for your kind and sweet replies! "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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