Open Poetry #6 |
Within The Touch Of Mescaline (Seymour-Inspired) |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Within The Touch Of Mescaline ~*Marge Tindal*~ Within the touch of mescaline, visions not many eyes have seen. Turning thoughts to wings a'flight, bringing fantasies to light. Captivating me within the realm of the beauty of surround. Mesmerizing mind and tongue vivid thoughts have just begun. Soaring far beyond the me, sights before I've never seen. Winds of chance now blow me home, but, oh what freedom was my roam. *Inspired by Seymour's 'A Touch Of Mescaline' This little Cherokee thanks you, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Mom? Tell me some more about the good ole days...lol! Thank you Marge, this is actually quite lovely, such a sense of nostalgia here...SMILES from me to you... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge, I love it! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
What a great reply to his post |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Marge! Denise |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Wonderous writing, Marge. Perhaps we Indians should also write a little something along the lines of ~ "Within a Wee Pinch of Peyote" Nah? Oh well, 'twas a thought... |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Great writing Marge! Marina |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge, Soaring far beyond the me, I love this line. Also sounds like fun. Cerenity |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Beautiful, left me feeling free and capable of anything... Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Well done... enjoyed. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Child ! You make me laugh. Martie~ Thanks, gal. Hoot~ Seymour is quite the inspiration, eh? Denise~ It just popped to the page after Seymour's poem. Claire~ LOL ! Pinching the Peyote. Works for me. Marina~ Why thank you muchly. Cerenity~ You picked my favorite line too. Sonjes~ The capability to soar is within each of our fantasies. Mike~ Thanks. ~*Marge*~ < !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 03-09-2000).] |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
Another astonisher. I've never tried mescaline, however, you know where i could get any good hookups? (j/k) |
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Ixtab Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 105MEXICAlpan de las tunas |
Turning thoughts to wings a 'flight... You soar high with your poetry, beautifull. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EagleScorpion~ My stars .. I haven't tried it either. Heck, it's all I can do to keep up with the illusions in my mind ... IT'S A POEM ! LOL Guess you could try your local desert ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ixtab~ I appreciate you reading them. This one came from pure inspiration from the brilliant words of Seymour. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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