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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-03-08 07:43 PM


Within The Touch Of Mescaline
~*Marge Tindal*~

Within the touch of mescaline,
visions not many eyes have seen.
Turning thoughts to wings a'flight,
bringing fantasies to light.

Captivating me within the realm
of the beauty of surround.
Mesmerizing mind and tongue
vivid thoughts have just begun.

Soaring far beyond the me,
sights before I've never seen.
Winds of chance now blow me home,
but, oh what freedom was my roam.


*Inspired by Seymour's 'A Touch Of Mescaline'
This little Cherokee thanks you, my friend.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 2000-03-08 07:54 PM


Mom?  Tell me some more about the good ole days...lol!  Thank you Marge, this is actually quite lovely, such a sense of nostalgia here...SMILES from me to you...
Martie
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2 posted 2000-03-08 09:03 PM


Marge, I love it!
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3 posted 2000-03-08 09:40 PM


What a great reply to his post  
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4 posted 2000-03-08 11:13 PM


Very beautiful, Marge!

Denise

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5 posted 2000-03-08 11:23 PM


Wonderous writing, Marge. Perhaps we Indians should also write a little something along the lines of ~


"Within a Wee Pinch of Peyote"


Nah? Oh well, 'twas a thought...  

Marina
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6 posted 2000-03-08 11:29 PM


Great writing Marge!

Marina


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7 posted 2000-03-09 01:17 AM


Hi Marge,

Soaring far beyond the me, I love this line. Also sounds like fun.

Cerenity

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8 posted 2000-03-09 07:09 AM


Beautiful, left me feeling free and capable of anything...

  Don't care what people say
Just follow your own way
Don't give up and use the chance
To return to innocence.
-Enigma

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9 posted 2000-03-09 10:29 AM


Well done... enjoyed.
Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2000-03-09 11:23 AM


Serenity~
Child !  You make me laugh.

Martie~
Thanks, gal.  

Hoot~
Seymour is quite the inspiration, eh?

Denise~
It just popped to the page after
Seymour's poem.  

Claire~
LOL !  Pinching the Peyote.
Works for me.    

Marina~
Why thank you muchly.  

Cerenity~
You picked my favorite line too.  

Sonjes~
The capability to soar is within
each of our fantasies.  

Mike~
Thanks.  
~*Marge*~


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 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com           



[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 03-09-2000).]

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11 posted 2000-03-10 11:22 AM


Another astonisher. I've never tried mescaline, however, you know where i could get any good hookups? (j/k)
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12 posted 2000-03-10 12:41 PM


Turning thoughts to wings a 'flight...
You soar high with your poetry, beautifull.

Marge Tindal
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13 posted 2000-03-10 03:27 PM


EagleScorpion~
My stars .. I haven't tried it either.
Heck, it's all I can do to keep up with
the illusions in my mind ...
IT'S A POEM ! LOL  
Guess you could try your local desert !  
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Marge Tindal
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14 posted 2000-03-10 03:29 PM


Ixtab~
I appreciate you reading them.
This one came from pure inspiration from the brilliant words of Seymour.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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