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This Present |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Open it, it’s for you, a simple gift, really, inside this tiny, shiny box, the golden gilt part of me. Just a poem, inscribed in ink, of the indelible kind, etched in faint memoirs of past lives so entwined. As though you were heaven sent, just in time to save me from me, for you could only be an angel proof He exists in trilogy. If I could only express in words, this peace inside of my heart, this language lacks romance, but here is at least a start. Know that I’m fraught with faults afraid a tad more than a few, but you’ve shown me a path of light that lead me straight to you. If you can forgive my past sins, see something worth salvaging, I’ll hold you dear, to my heart, give you gifts only love can bring. So much in the offering. © 2000 Corinne Bailey Corinne |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Corinne, this is hopeful, fragile and sweet. A prayer of lucky love for you tonight! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ A precious gift found within this verse. You are gifted. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
What a wonderful and sincere poem Corinne. With the right love all sins can be forgiven. Marina |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Corinne, This is so deep, so sweet, a prayer, from your heart. There is somebody out here listening, and every word you write, sings in my mind with a heavenly voice. So much in the offering... and gifts too..  Parker........ I smile therefore I am. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Love is the most precious gift of all. Hope yours is met with acceptance. Beautiful words, Corinne. michael |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Serenity, thank you for the prayer! Marge, you are too kind! Marina, I hope you are right! Parker, always see something behind your lines! Hidden messages left to find! Michael, I wish the same for you, dear. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This poem tells your heart in a very lovely, tender way. Well done! |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
your words, Corinne! so life-mirroring. Rick |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Corinne! Heartfelt expression! Denise |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
If only we can accept each other for "who we are" rather than someone we'd like to mold each other into.... life would be much simpler, wouldn't it?.. Nice job, my friend..  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful gift you give of yourself |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you very much, Martie, RAM, Denise, Nan and Hoot. |
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