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~ Running Naked through the Trees ~
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~ Running Naked through the Trees ~ |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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~ Running Naked through the Trees ~ Nothing here to hide as I stand here in your breeze ever freely - running naked through your trees... Timeless is your gaze as your eyes sweep o'er my soul ever freely - as your laughter makes me whole... Nothing holds me back you encourage me with love ever freely - on your wings, I soar above... Priceless is your strength I can always count on you ever freely - as you love me through and through. Searched for you so long now we love with breathless ease ever freely - you & I run through the trees... Naked. Love does not chain you down - it offers you wings to soar...and encourages you to do so. pFF |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Breath taking poem. I couldn't agree with you more. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
"as your eyes sweep o'er my soul". I think that's what love does, sees beyond the physcial person and sees the soul within, "ever freely". So nice. (psssssssst, get some clothes on). |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Oh....Danny....er.....um....(getting clothes on right away so you don't die of laughter!) ROFLMAO Didn't mean to make you choke there! hehe  I really didn't think anyone would notice in here! LOL |
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mystery Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 79 |
GREAT POEM! BUT I CAN ONLY IMAGINE WHAT TRUE LOVE FEELS LIKE, BECAUSE I HAVEN'T EXPERIENCED IT YET. BUT WHEN I VISUALIZED RUNNING THROUGH TREES NAKED AND COMBINE IT WITH LOVE, THEN I KNOW IT MUST BE A GOOD FEELING. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Femme, your just a wanna be Jane, wheres Tarzan when you need him eh!..... I was going to do the Tarzan yell, but I can't spell it. Interesting effect the breeze has on you though. Oh did I say that out loud..... dum dum de dum dum. I'm outta here. |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Running Bare? Watch out for the thorns and twigs...sometimes they leave (leaf?) scars... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
lovely visuals here--makes me want to run somewhere naked, but it's raining... |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
MARTIE!!! What are you thinking?? That makes it even better! LOL Now shuck those clothes and GO! I'll cover for ya! hehehe (waggin head!)  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
pFF~ Wow! Loved the title....this is so beautiful.Made me feel so free!  -SEA |
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MyPenNameIsSam Member
since 2000-03-06
Posts 94usa |
I like the way you speak of true love and nature with the same characteristics... as if they are one in the same.... Very nice. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Cute! We should all be so free..... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Femme~ Nekkid is a good thing ! I like. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful!! I have done this (what? You're surprised?) and it's the best feeling in the world. . . And now, Femme, would you and Martie like to join me in a quick gallop through the woods? And btw, who cares if it's raining? LOL --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I can only echo the comments of MyPenNameIsSam. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Wow, I have gotten quite the variety of readers and replies on this one! hehe So nice to see some of you, glad you've all got clothes on too! I could pick out each one of you and say something really sweet back, but I'll just say, "LET'S ALL GET NAKED AND RUN !!" Whew....talk about a stress reliever! Thanks all! Hey - - Watch out for that TReeeeee!! BONK.  (Sprinting off in the buff to look for someone!) hehe Catch you people later! (cheesy grin!) Er....I better lay off the caffeine, 'eh? No more. |
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