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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia 
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How can I be unfaithful? You inspired all my best What remains for another? Hate is a dead thing. Who of you would be a tomb? -Kahlil Gibran |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
wow, how can 3 lines say so much? |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
And the last line should read: "Just overlook all the rest".....Hi ya Hawk! |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Excellent! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow Rebel...you have spoke volumes in a matter of 14 well written and well put words. Wonderfully said, there's no shame in brevity when it results in a creation such as this  |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Thanks all!! appreciate the comments truly... Buzz... if only!!! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Rebel, very powerful message.... I love the title, somehow I knew it was haiku. Parker |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LR~you took the words right outta my heart!Excellent! -SEA |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Clever 'aiku~ing... ~ Claire |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
What remains? Hummm.....well, probably at least nothing above the waist? Er....I didn't say that, did I ?? Never mind!! Someone delete me or something....ROFL Sorry sir...didn't mean to make *light* of your 3 little lines...  Sweet, and so so short...hehe |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
I'm sorry pFF... didn't get the joke... nothing ABOVE the waist??? you say??? lol.... make as light as you wish!! always...  |
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