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A Distinguished Gentleman (Repost from Open 1)
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A Distinguished Gentleman (Repost from Open 1) |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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A Distinguished Gentleman This romantic feast set before a hungry palette, unleashes a slow-cooker barbecue that's been sweetly simmering since the beautiful moment two wide open searching eyes... Tasted the distinctive flavor of a distinguished gentleman. Winds of pleasure seldom crossed his darkened paths, since he rode a distinctively different horse. A horse many say was slyly eating away his life. The pale, cold, lifeless, faces that he cautiously encountered each day, hauntingly displayed the perils that encroached upon their lives. He found it bitterly difficult to cheerily involve himself in delightful adventures that took place within the grasping reach of his forever understanding friends. Then came an extraordinary day no pale, cold, lifeless faces to greet him this day. Instead what appeared before him... A beautiful, warm, smiling face, and two wide open searching eyes... |
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RufffRyder Member
since 2000-02-25
Posts 143<------Over There------> |
Ya sure have a way with words. Thank you for the read L.D. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow, this is jam packed full of wonderful imagery  |
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mystery Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 79 |
Nice word play. This was an excellenet poem, I enjoyed reading it. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
that one hits close to home there.. very nice. |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Finely crafted Lost Dreamer and a movement of words |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Thank You all for your kind responses, glad you all enjoyed it. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I enjoyed this too, Lost Dreamer...such a neat descriptive piece depicting the poignancy of sudden vulnerability. Really nice writing. ~ Claire |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Claire: Thank You very much, glad you liked it. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Gloria, this is so beautiful! Denise |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Denise: Thank You very much. |
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