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infinat3 sadn3ss
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since 2000-02-14
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somerset england

0 posted 2000-03-07 02:50 PM


I cried twice today ,
because today , i went away .
I didnt get a hug or a farewell moan ,
just a pat on the back and a "youll be fine on your own".

I had to go and find some aid ,
to keep me alive and so some words could be said .

You see , i am not well,
this room im in is more like hell,
i have a fever and i'm delerious,
somebody help , i think its serious .

i dont know how long ill be ,
youd better find someone to cover for me .

© Copyright 2000 mike cable - All Rights Reserved
Thinker
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 8

1 posted 2000-03-07 05:41 PM


I dont quite know what to say
except that your friends are always
there..
sometimes they may be hard to talk to
but they can help.
Talk about it..
Im happy to help and so is louise.
Dont suffer on your own man.... its not healthy

The thinker

 To think is a right
To know is to be too sure of your own exsistance

mete out
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 270
england
2 posted 2000-03-08 05:57 AM


***Cable,
I'm SO sorry I wasn't there for you last night...I'll explain in my mail to you.

Your words ring true here once again.
You have so much talent that it is a shame you need to write about all this...as Ryan said, we are here...
love lou   xxx


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.

mete out
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 270
england
3 posted 2000-03-13 05:55 AM


I'm just sending this up to the top again as it deserves more attention....    :รพ

 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.

angelswing
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 705
United Kingdom
4 posted 2000-03-13 07:28 AM


Oh dear,
you ain't feelin that bad are you cabe, great poem, hope you sort it all out and become the normal bouncy Cabe, we all know and love so much .


 With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .

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