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| Open Poetry #6 |
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Rainbow of Love |
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mystery Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 79 |
Gazing at the clear blue skies In a daze by the vibrant sun I shed tears of joy Because I am happy to be with you I have exposed my spectrum of love When you see the color red Don't think that I am embarrassed by you Know that I am proud of your love Red is for our intensely heated passion You are beautiful like autumn leaves With an attitude that reflects on me like the sun Orange represents your warmth Golden is your skin tone My first prize possession Sweeter than the taste of honey Yellow will retain this memory Green is for your youthful appearance So vigorous and full of life Many women envy me because I have you Blue expresses the way that I feel When you are not around me Being my other half I feel imcomplete without you The deepest feeling inside of me Is represented by Indigo For I wish that you never let me go In love with your regal ways Who would not love a man of your stature Purple reveals how imperial you are This spectrum that I show you Will never fade It remains brilliant and true My rainbow of love represents seven colors And those seven colors represent you |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely colors in your rainbow!  |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Mystery: What a beautiful use of seven colours to express your love. The first stanza drew me in and the second stanza was my favourite, maybe because red is my favourite colour. You certainly do have a way with words. Excellent poem, it was creative and flowed perfectly. This is the first poem that I have read by you, and I must say I am impressed. I look forward to reading more poetry by you. I wonder why no one else has discovered your gem. Take care, Melissa Honeybee  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mystery~ It's no mystery that I like this. Such a myriad of colors. A spectrum of vivid hues ... splashed all over the canvas. Lovely, just lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Very beautiful and expressive with detail! I like how you ended it Now every time I see a rainbow I will think of your poem! "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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mystery Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 79 |
I appreciate the compliments that I have received from all of you talented poets. I am glad that everyone enjoyed reading this piece. Thank You! and I look forward to reading your works as well. To Marge, I'll keep that in mind each time I write a new poem."THE PEN OF THE POET NEVER RUNS OUT OF INK, AS LONG AS WE BREATHE." |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A beautiful way to express your love, the 7 colours of the rainbow. Beautiful. looking forward to reading more of your works. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Well now - this is really interesting! I like it I do!  So cool how you found something for every color! |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Um....one more thing....er....don't the rainbows come AFTER the rain? Okay...just making sure, cause I'm in the middle of a freakin' toad strangler in my life, and I'm sure hoping for a rainbow like this once it's over - IF I survive!  Thanks for a bit of hope! |
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