Color My World (For The Crayon King)

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Open Poetry #6

Color My World (For The Crayon King)

Rapunsel
New Member

since 2000-02-24

Posts 9

0 posted 2000-03-07 11:30 AM

Dearest King
I bow before you now
giving myself
in offering
to you

Let my body
be your canvas
and fingerpaint color
into my black and white world

Paint me blue
as your eyes
in summer light
and the skies
on a cloudless day

Green
as the vines
my arms will become
to cling to you
and as the grass
I will lay you down upon

Gold
as the crown
placed upon your head
and the sunlight
that streams
in the window at day break

And paint me red
as my heart
that beats for you
and for the passion
you envoke in me

Oh dearest King
create in me
a masterpiece
as you color my world
with your love

[This message has been edited by Rapunsel (edited 03-07-2000).]

mete out
Member

since 2000-02-16

Posts 270
england

1 posted 2000-03-07 11:48 AM

This is a wonderful first post....so visual and emotive.
Welcome to Passions.

I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.

Nurse Crachet
Member

since 1999-09-27

Posts 318
They know where I am!

2 posted 2000-03-07 12:30 PM

She desires you to color her world
in colors of natures earth,
she desires you to color
in all her self worth.
I desire only you
to reach out
and see
me.

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

3 posted 2000-03-07 06:09 PM

Very nice poem and the colors are a nice touch.
Welcome to Passions.

Dr.Moose1
Member Elite

since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

4 posted 2000-03-07 06:15 PM

Whoa...King !!!
You're getting to be quite the Alpha Male around here .Best luck to ya buddy !
Doc

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

5 posted 2000-03-07 08:19 PM

Rapunsel you've got some fine hair
And all the right curve from here to there
But Red is my color
The crayon box full
Her's is the only shade for which I care
Rapunsel your words call to me
Like the siren of the great see
But I'm tied to the mast
Anchored to my love
Upon Red's shore is where I wish to be

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