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Open Poetry #6

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Bbuzz
Member

since 1999-12-17

Posts 76
Washinton State

0 posted 2000-02-06 06:57 PM

Beaches cooled by ocean breeze
Making sway the tall palm trees.

Tides display the oceans treasures
Each new "find" excites and pleasures.

Swim clad people lay about
Watching for a whale to spout.

Basking in the rays of sun
Staying 'til the day is done.

Returning to a cosy home
Tired & hungry, but thinking poem.

Deep contentment, smiling face.
Oh God, how I love this place!

Sorry so many "Hawaii" poems! Just have to "let them out"! LOL, Bev

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2000-02-06 07:15 PM

Bbuzz, Hawaii is beautiful and very inspiring. Let 'em flow!

-SEA

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-02-06 11:24 PM

Beautiful poem, Bev! It must be a beautiful place to have inspired this!

Denise

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

3 posted 2000-02-07 01:04 AM

Wow Mom...makes me feel like I'm there!
Wish I were there

Glad to see you had fun!!!
Love ~S

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

4 posted 2000-02-07 02:23 PM

Bev, this was great, wish I was there too!

Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*

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