| Open Poetry #6 |
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Kihei |
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Bbuzz Member
since 1999-12-17
Posts 76Washinton State |
Beaches cooled by ocean breeze Making sway the tall palm trees. Tides display the oceans treasures Each new "find" excites and pleasures. Swim clad people lay about Watching for a whale to spout. Basking in the rays of sun Staying 'til the day is done. Returning to a cosy home Tired & hungry, but thinking poem. Deep contentment, smiling face. Oh God, how I love this place! Sorry so many "Hawaii" poems! Just have to "let them out"! LOL, Bev |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Bbuzz, Hawaii is beautiful and very inspiring. Let 'em flow! -SEA |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful poem, Bev! It must be a beautiful place to have inspired this! Denise |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Wow Mom...makes me feel like I'm there! Wish I were there ![]() Glad to see you had fun!!! Love ~S |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Bev, this was great, wish I was there too! Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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