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Open Poetry #6

New Love

nona
Member

since 2000-03-03

Posts 139
Fla

0 posted 2000-03-06 10:07 AM

At first there is an urgency,
a need to touch and to caress,
a feeling that you can't surpress.
The bond is new and fresh
and stirs within your flesh.
But the bond is fragile
and easily broken.
Many deeds and acts of kindness,
words that don't need to be spoken
but felt within your heart
these are the things that make
a lasting bond...........nona

mete out
Member

since 2000-02-16

Posts 270
england

1 posted 2000-03-06 10:15 AM

***Nona,
This poem is so beautiful and oozes truth.
You have captured the feeling of new love perfectly.
.............

I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

2 posted 2000-03-06 11:12 AM

mete out said it best.
Nice piece.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-03-06 08:09 PM

Very nice, Nona! You have described it perfectly!

Denise

January Flowers
Member

since 2000-02-01

Posts 209
South Carolina

4 posted 2000-03-06 08:39 PM

Perfectly True!
Nice writing.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2000-03-07 07:44 AM

I can feel it Nona....new love is so desirable. James

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