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Open Poetry #6

Deceitful, intriguing, eternally yours

Tan
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since 2000-03-05

Posts 7

0 posted 2000-03-06 01:27 AM

Never in motion, I move without pause
Unjustified actions yet always with cause
Achieving perfection with infinite flaws
Deceitful, intriguing, eternally yours

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 2000-03-06 01:30 AM

Short - but intriguing. love the ending....

michael

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

2 posted 2000-03-06 06:23 AM

There is so much underlying this piece - I like it! Like Michael I am intrigued.

'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 2000-03-06 10:42 AM

SO much said in so few words....there is nothing wrong with being brief at all when your thoughts run deep

Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

4 posted 2000-03-06 09:05 PM

The conflicting phrases make this an interesting piece. Enjoyed it.

devina
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

5 posted 2000-03-06 09:12 PM

Short and to the point...very well put!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

6 posted 2000-03-06 10:18 PM

I think it takes great talent to say so much with few words! This is great!!

Denise

Toyy
Junior Member

since 2000-03-02

Posts 16
Reno Nv.

7 posted 2000-03-07 06:51 PM

Wow!! Awesome! I love this piece, MORE MORE!!
So short so much!
Gil

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