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I saw what I wanted for me
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I saw what I wanted for me |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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Sooner or later we wake up, sooner or later it ends. It seems life at times, that we make up images of those we call friends. And sooner or later we wake up, and see it was all in our minds. So much time, confusion can take up, so much pain as a friendship unwinds. You were not the person I once knew, Today I have come to see. All the time that you were being you I saw what I wanted for me. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kevin~ Very astute. Very sad if true in your life. I think we always look for a little of ourselves in our friendships ... and are sometimes disappointed when they don't turn out the way we hoped they'd be. Hope all is well in your corner of the world. Good to see you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Kevin...it's nice to see you back around, been missing your posts here  |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Hi guys! thank you for replying im sorry i havent been able to get to anyone elses posts, or read any of my replys for that matter, life is hectic right now, and i can only drop in breifly every now and then... but i still thought someone might enjoy the read and hey if ive got 5 minutes hehe...anyways good to hear from ya kev |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Wow Kevin...so much truth in just 3 stanzas...Bravo! Unfortunately, I am awake too. LOL And unwound...geesh, what a ride. I relate to, " I saw what I wanted for me".....Excellent writing sir. Do we ever really know the other person? I don't think so....tis sad. We only see what we want to see, I have been very guilty of that. I applaude your honesty and your thoughts on this. Gennifer |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Sir Kevin, another great write. Deep is the meaning here, and you always write these messages with ease. excellant. Parker |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Kevin~ "waking up" isn't always easy on the heart. Enjoyed the read. -SEA |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Good poem! I think this is true sometimes, we want our friends to be the same type of person we are and when they aren't we justify it....  |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Kevin, wonderful writing! I think you have wisdom beyond your years sir! Marina |
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