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LenMcC1 Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 68 |
If I fall will you catch me? If I grieve will you console me? If I smile will you smile with me? If I love you will you love me? Everything I know Is nothing without a world to live in Everything I feel Is nothing without someone to touch me Everything I see Is nothing but a silhouette of a dream Hope to love Is not on my path Hope to hate Is somewhere on the way Hope to be lonely Is always a reality Knowing the truth Is a lie to myself Knowing how to live Is death to my soul Knowing her Is all I have Everything I know Is nothing without a world to live in Everything I feel Is nothing without someone to touch me Everything I see Is nothing but a silhouette of a dream |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Well done. I liked the contrasts and the repeated refrain. Don't loose heart. Anything worth having is worth fighting for.....persistance pays off. INclan |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great poem! Well done! Denise |
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