Open Poetry #6 |
It's High Time |
Martie
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(I wrote this poem a long time ago, but it seemed appropriate for this time of year) It’s high time that the sky is pink and the stars stay out all day. It’s high time we say hello and smile into eyes that warm the front yards of each others hearts. It’s high time that you’re glad to know me and I, knowing nothing of you, just know all I need to know. It’s high time that without roses I sense something that is beautiful and delicate, the petals not turning brown to my touch. It's high time pollywogs moonbeams pusywillow that are not there yet, are somewhere giving the impression of perhaps in spring. It’s high time that politics and oceans and other vast deep and who knows what it's all about things turn upside down and show there other sides. It’s high time that all the paperback books in the world turned themselves into human tears or maybe laughter and perhaps even love. It’s high time to sing a song about a we a thee and a me in a crazy world full of ever growing sweet peas It’s high time that you and I be us and create a heaven full of chocolate molasses and the moon and much more care of small smiles. In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
"It's high time" someone wrote a great poem like this. Fun to read and wish for. Nice writing! Danny |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Oh Martie, I don't know how you do it... But you've done it again. As I was reading the radio played in one of the children's back rooms. It was playing "Love Is A Rose." It certianly is a time to be living. Warm Warm (((Hugs))) [email protected] |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Well yes I take that chocolate there A very fine poem Martie, and it contains so much sweets and sweetness it's dripping Did I tell you I love chocolate It's high time you and I get together , about the chocolate that is The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
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It's high time for me to be liking a poem. |
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SEA
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Posts 22676with you |
Martie, pass the chocolate!!! This is so nice, now if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna go get a Hershey Bar!-SEA |
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Martie
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Flowers, chocolate and pollywogs for all of you, with my thank you. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Martie, I don't have any more adjectives left for you How about GRRRREAT! Love ya Liz |
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fool Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 61 |
This so upbeat Marty,it has a really happy outlook,thanx for sharing it. |
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Martie
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Liz, thank you and Tony the Tiger and love to you. fool, thanks for reading and the up beat reply |
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Marge Tindal
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Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie- If this poem said nothing more than- 'smile into eyes that warm the front yards of each others hearts'- it would have said it all. Beautiful, my friend. Beautiful. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Martie
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Marge--Thanks for being the wonderful friend that you are! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
It’s high time that all the paperback books in the world turned themselves into human tears or maybe laughter and perhaps even love. this is my most favorite stanza of anythin i read in long time gave me chills it did. great poem |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Loved it Martie Did Jesus laugh? I think He did, 'cause He was once a little kid; and all of us were made with joy both sugar-spice girl and snake-snail boy! |
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Martie
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Hey, wayoutwalt, glad to have given you chills and thanks for enjoying. Echo- Thanks so much for reading and replying so sweetly |
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