Open Poetry #6 |
Menopausal Moments |
HM3 Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 169TX |
Menopausal moments, it's hot in here! Hormones taunting, "the end is near" Hot flashes that seem to last for days My Mother confirms, I'm in that stage Gravity is working on this body of mine Aging daily like a dry sweet wine My joints are cracking, my muscles ache The joys of womanhood, the masquerade I'm still just a kid, and always will be But you can't tell just by looking at me My hair is graying, but not my heart The hell with nature, I'll end where I start < !signature--> Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching... [This message has been edited by HM3 (edited 03-03-2000).] |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
LOL Nice work HM3, was quite humorous I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
This is too cute. Many truths spoken here. The outside can be fixed it's the heart that bares our age. Your as old as you feel. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
LOL |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
'the hell with nature' ... good for you! our sense of humour keeps us at 21 Rex}<{{{{o> |
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Tasi Junior Member
since 2000-02-08
Posts 38Canada |
Loved it ....my mom would be laughing so hard!! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
LOL this was great! What we have to look forward too! <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
LoL, this is great! Did Jesus laugh? I think He did, 'cause He was once a little kid; and all of us were made with joy both sugar-spice girl and snake-snail boy! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ditto, ditto, ditto...like your humor. Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Mothers are like that! And so is life I'm afraid. Very cute poem. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
This is just what I wanted, a smile to go to bed on.. Now pass me your fan please?..*g* HUGS The grape passes through the press to yield wine. Your life must pass through the press of passion and pain to yield the wine of wisdom.. |
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