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hoot_owl_rn
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0 posted 2000-03-03 03:42 PM


Love By Number

One ring
Two hearts
Three words
Forever yours

< !signature-->

 Have you ever noticed
That the words...
"Goodbye"
"I'm sorry"
"I love you"
Are so easy to pronounce
...Yet so hard to say
~Javan


[This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 03-03-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Ruth Kephart - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 2000-03-03 03:46 PM


Ruth, short, sweet and beautiful! Well Done.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Denise
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2 posted 2000-03-03 04:07 PM


Oh, Ruth, this is so sweet! I love it! You covered all the bases with so few words!!

Denise

Honeybee
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3 posted 2000-03-03 04:27 PM




   Less really is more!  You should write Hallmark greeting cards.  This is just beautiful.  You express marriage and love so well.  I truly do admire you, both in your talent for writing poetry and for just being you, you are always so kind to me and everyone else here.  P.S. - Do you do weddings?  Cause when I get married I want you to write the vows and the poetry!Well, you do have the talent for it! LOL

Take care Ruth,
Melissa Honeybee  

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4 posted 2000-03-03 04:36 PM


Ruth~
This is just precious.
~*Marge*~


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tracie66
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5 posted 2000-03-03 05:07 PM


Ruth this may be short but it is a tender piece..so sweet  


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

Michael
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6 posted 2000-03-03 05:45 PM


Hey, run that by me again...I must've blinked...LOL   So that's how it works....  O.K.  maybe I'll get it right on of these times....LOL

Michael

Martie
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7 posted 2000-03-03 06:07 PM


Sigh!
Danny Holloway
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8 posted 2000-03-03 06:14 PM


more numbers please.....
nice Ruth

Elizabeth Santos
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9 posted 2000-03-03 06:25 PM


says it all
Liz

Tara Simms
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10 posted 2000-03-03 06:41 PM


Ruth, this really would make a cute card!
Mike
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11 posted 2000-03-03 06:53 PM


One nurse,
One heart,
One poem,
"One"erful.

wildbill58
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12 posted 2000-03-03 07:00 PM


love it Hoot
hoot_owl_rn
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13 posted 2000-03-03 07:29 PM


Melissa...I actually do have one gretting card..lol. Thanks, you flatter me with your words. Hey, you set the date and I'll write anything you want written...vows, announcements, proposals, prenuputal agreement (oops...that one slipped in there   )

Dark Angel, Denise, Marge, Tracie, Martie, Danny, Elizabeth, Tara and Wildbill...thank you all  

Mike...that's sweet, thanks  

Michael...Yeah, so I've been told that's how it goes...I just must not be able to count

Balladeer
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14 posted 2000-03-03 08:36 PM


Very cute, Ruth  
Pepper
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15 posted 2000-03-04 10:59 AM


So sweet , sweet one !!!  
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