Open Poetry #6 |
I Touch The Flame |
Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
I Touch The Flame I touch the flame upon the wick of your candle knowing that's the closest I'll ever be to your heart. It flickers in unison with the pulse of my soul, only my pulse beats faster with the thought of you. I watch the candle as it's flame floats me away day dreaming about the glowing smile upon your face, the intensity of your bright spectrum personality that lights up even the darkest corner of my mind. As I return to reality the flickering of the flame has died I go over and touch the cold wick and my heart stops beating. |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
intense...really great writing....whew...made my heart beat harder just to read....sigh |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is excellent writing, Nurse! Well done!! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nurse C~ The flame still flickers .... back to the top for another round. I like this very much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
This really touched me deep As the candle is a seed To show emotions that I know To know these feelings I cannot show Well done, excellent writing The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nurse this is excellent writing. Just the right touch of romance. James |
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