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Would I Love You Just As Much ?
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Would I Love You Just As Much ? |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Would I Love You Just As Much ? ~*Marge Tindal*~ I've often thought about it Would I love you just as much if we had never met if we had never touched If we had never kissed if we never had made love would I love you just as much as the stars that shine above Would I continue to want you hungering for your touch Would I still need your loving Would I love you just as much It's written in the stars you're mine forevermore Would I love you just as much No ~ ~ I'd love you even more ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
I do not need to imagine I can see it right here Your poem speaks words so laudly A love you should not fear Deep feeling I can clearly see Such a nice piece of poetry Love The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
This is beautiful, tugs right on the heart strings. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Lovely reading, and a kiss at the end Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, This has a deep meaning in truth and you said it well. *L* |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Fate always has a way of stepping in, and you've got in all right here!!! Very well said dearie!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is beautiful, Marge, and so true. We all have one person that we love with all our heart. Sometimes we never have the opportunity to meet them but we don't love them any less.....well written |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Beautiful Marge! <*\\\>< There's only two ways you can go... One way you can save your riches, And the other will save your soul. Rich Mullins |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
HelmutB~ You are just the best ! Love you. Nurse C~ Thank you ... tugging at heartstrings is what love does best, isn't it? Elizabeth, my friend~ Kisses say it best ! Love you. Seymour~ It's as deep as it gets. Love you. Devina~ You are so special to this lady's heart. Love you. Balladeer~ We meet in love ! Love you lots. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Simply beuatiful, Marge, as always!  Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Little WhiteDove~ You squeaked in while I was posting. Thank you, honey. Love you. Denise~ I just love that phrase ... 'as always' Makes me feel I did it right. Love you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Fortunately these are only feary tales and scenario's of things gone by... Thank God..! It's nice to dream like Balladeer who apparently sometimes feels we've never taken the opportunity to meet these "other..." and he don't love 'em any less (and might I add never will)... O philosophy... Darn it..! I think I lost my train of thought, and to think it was all right there just a secoud ago. Oh Well, another auld lang syne. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky~ Thank you for liking (you did mean to mention that didn't you?) If you hurry you can catch the next train ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
With those kind of kookies I could keep you on top forever... shhh, don't tell. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh so beautiful, very touching Marge Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky~ LOL ! I won't if you don't. Tracie~ Hi there again, little friend. Glad you found it so. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh my...this certainly catches my heart strings and pulls at them a bit. Absolutely beautiful my friend |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hoot~ Awwwwwwww ! Thanks for letting me know. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is lovely, Marge! *S* |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Marge: You make me believe in the power of love-nice piece. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Suthern~ Lovely of you to let me know. Gemini~ If I had anything to do with that .... I'm smiling for you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Marge, absolutley beautiful!!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ Ohhhhhhhhh ! Thank you soooooooo much. I kind of just knew you'd like it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I'm so glad I saw this one, Marge...I love it, and am moved by its striking truth! Beautiful! ~ Claire |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Claire~ That makes two of us ! I'm so glad to share it with you. If it moves you ... I've earned my smile. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Beautiful Marge! One of your best... Marina [This message has been edited by Marina (edited 03-03-2000).] |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Jeez, I've been gone for a few days...between doctor's appointments and my mom's computer having yet another virus...and I come back and by some miracle you write a poem I love even more than the last. I don't know how you manage, but I'm glad you do  .~Susie~ |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
Very beautiful expression from the heart. Nice *Leaves me feeling warm and thinking of my special someone* Kim |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge, What can I say that has not already been said, nothing but it is wonderful and I love it, I enjoy your poetry so much, thank you. Cerenity |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Marge, I know of this person you speak, and we have never met, touched, kissed, and when we ever meet I will love them even more. Beautiful..... Parker |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marina~ Thank you. Glad you enjoyed. Angel~ So glad you are better. Thank you for being here. KimW~ Thank you and welcome to Passion's. Cerenity~ Your comments are always welcomed by this lady. Parker~ Oh ..... now this is a man with ~heart~. Thank you, Parker ... it pleases me that you enjoy the things I write. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Marge , your muse was working overtime on this one !!! 'S' I LOVE it !!!!!!!!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hi, little Pepper~ Just seeing your little name gave me a reason to be joyous this morning. So glad you enjoyed the musings of my heart. Love you, gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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