Open Poetry #6 |
Color Black |
Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
The road of life is hard for us all at any given moment. It is our lack of wisdom that deceives us. It's our lack of faith and strength that evades us. Always conparing our selves to one another not thinking that they are in just as much pain and confusion as we our. Never quiet happy with our side of life and always searching for more as if more were they answer. We were designed to handle just the right amount of or own pain. There is no such thing as Mr. and Miss. Right, for their joys will also take on shades of grays and black. It's you that must decipher how hard you must be on your self and the color in which you to reside. Remember the color black is really all colors conbined together and life in its conpleteness is the hard times along with the good times. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
So true--enjoyed your poem. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
I really liked this. I agree with you also. We as humans all suffer and feel pain. Just because its individulized and felt differently, doesnt mean it isn't felt. Thanks so much for posting this. Great insight, great poem! AMY ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Martie and Aimster, Thank you for your replys, I was kind of afraid to post this poem. Its kind of strongly stated. I find it hard some times when I see other people gaining so much solid ground and I seem to have to fight for every thing, so I needed to look at things from a different veiw point, some times it helps and other times it does'nt. Thank you, Cerenity |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I love this Cerenity! WOW! Such wonderful insights into life are contained in this! Well done! I am glad that you posted it! Denise |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Such wisdom you pen. So many truths in so few lines. I believe you have stated the reality of it all. Well done! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Hi ... I tend to post most things in 'red' Does this have any special meaning ... should I change colors ... or does it even matter ? My bank tends to update my book with red too ... could there be some connection ? '''Puzzled in Ontario''' just kidding excellent poem Rex}<{{{{o> I'm not ugly! I'm just visually challenged! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi everybody, Danny, Wisdom is a good thing if you follow through with it, Were I Stand does offer movement If I would just start using some of it. Denise, You wonderful lady, thank you so much, I seem to have alot of this kind of poetry and my life is filled with so many colors, but for some reason I get hung up on the grays and blacks. Rex Allen, I post most of the time in red too. my favorite rose is red, and my bank is always in the RED,,, so I think you should never stop a good thing. Thank you all, Cerenity |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wise words |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Cerenity-1: Such wise words indeed. This is inspirational. I have printed out a copy for myself, and will keep it in a drawer by my bed and when I wake up in the morning on the bad days, all I will have to do is read it and decide that I will live my life that day in a bright optimistic colour. Thanks for writing such an insightful poem. I, myself also use the colour red every time, what does that say about me? Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very innovative to create a poem with these thoughts. Nicely done, Cerenity. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cerenity, I do know what you mean, this one touched me deeply. |
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