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PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2000-02-09 10:59 AM


He used to think the day would never come
When his life would depend on the morning sun
You used to think life was coming undone
Until you met him and his heart you won
There you are in his loving embrace
And you look upon his smiling face
He wishes somehow it could stay this way
You wish this could be your special place
So together you plot a new course
Even though both are a little unsure
But each other is what you’re living for
And that’s what it’s all about, of course


© Copyright 2000 J.M. Landry - All Rights Reserved
Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
1 posted 2000-02-09 04:30 PM


Wonderfully said!

 Did Jesus laugh?
I think He did,
'cause He was once
a little kid;
and all of us
were made with joy
both sugar-spice girl
and snake-snail boy!

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 2000-02-11 11:14 PM


This is very sweet!

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When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?

Wizzard
Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209

3 posted 2000-02-11 11:45 PM


AMEN !!!
as long as the two of you are happy,that`s what counts.
Nice Job JML

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.

kitkat
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since 2000-01-11
Posts 878
Nova Scotia
4 posted 2000-02-13 05:37 PM


A so well said. Nice piece JML
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2000-02-13 08:05 PM


JML-
Even if a little off-course,
unity in hopes, dreams and goals are
worthy reasons to make the trip.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



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