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Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London

0 posted 2000-03-01 11:36 AM



Tune in Next Time
~~~

Mystic  minds  from  distant  planes
micro  messages  to  distant  brains
not  a  question  of
do  I  receive
but  rather  as  do  I  perceive?
~
Whirling  swirling  distant  notions
fill  my  head  with  loco  motions
you  see  black
but  I  see  red
swung  from  blue  and  yellow  thread
~
Pendulum  swinging  from  the  post
sparks  jump  where  it  touches  host
thoughts  received  and  now  decoded
take  a  taxi
fool
you're  loaded
~~~
< !signature-->

 I'm not ugly!
I'm just visually challenged!




[This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 03-01-2000).]

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Martie
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1 posted 2000-03-01 02:13 PM


You are loaded with humor and rhyme my friend...
Michael
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2 posted 2000-03-01 04:22 PM


This is wonderful, Rex - and no, I'm not either loaded!


Michael

Rex Allen McCoy
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3 posted 2000-03-02 12:12 PM


Martie ... thankyou ... I seldom write anything that is not humourous ... It's an addiction  

Michael ... You know ... I drank once when I was 16 and have never touched alcohol again ... I write sometimes about alcohol ... to bring either humour or a message such as this one ( don't drink and drive )... thankyou for reading and responding  

Severn
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4 posted 2000-03-02 12:14 PM


Big parallel here - the last time I drank was when I was 16 too I think, maybe 17...can't stand the stuff!

Well done! And we need humour here too - so thanks for it.

K

 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath

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5 posted 2000-03-02 12:55 PM


Rex~
Do you do coffee? ?
Yeah .... now that's the REAL thing !
You almost had me thinking this
was a great, mysterious, serious poem
from you .... until the 'pink elephant'
showed up !  

You are welcome to bring your humor
to this doorstep anytime !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
6 posted 2000-03-02 12:01 PM


Severn and Marge ... Glad you like my 'Dry Humour'
and as Marge asked 'Yes I do Coffee' ...
I raise my cup of coffee to you both and to everyone here at passions ... "CHEERS"

Rex}<{{{{o>


 I'm not ugly!
I'm just visually challenged!



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