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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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sharp intake, frigid breath, fingers--crude--telling lies-- eyes that meet and speak the truth in silent compromise. On battleground, the corpse, she lies, in sad repose, sweet remiss.. silently-- remembering-- electric sparks on fingertips... |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wo - some sharp words here. "Speak the truth in silent compromise" Good poem, serinity. I think my fingertips are calloused over... Michael |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Well I'd lend you a hand ... but all I have is a rubber sword Rex}<{{{{o> |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you, Incredible Michael, as always... and dear Rex Allen, Rex Allen--tonight that just might do!!! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow...this is powerful stuff here  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I have to agree with Ruth, this is powerful. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Very Interesting Serenity. You seem to write so well in so many different directions. Thanks, Rich [This message has been edited by spiked (edited 03-02-2000).] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Always remember those sparks hon, one day- you'll find those sparks again... This is short, sharp and very impressive m'dear sis!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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