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romeo romeo, wherefore are thou?
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romeo romeo, wherefore are thou? |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209
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lol ok, here's one completely off the wall from what I usually post....its about time for a smile  and lol, ok I just reread and maybe its not a smile, I was sorta mad when I wrote it, but I can smile now....does that count? are you talking to the pretty one while I am at work are you telling her the same I love your eyes, your smile your etc…line you used on me? Or is your arm draped softly over the shy one's shoulder befriending her with your comfortable grace and charm softly putting her at ease? Are you winking and grinning as you pass the naughty ones, the ones that see right through you so you don't have to hide who you really are? And did you put my name under S in your little black book? I must have looked like the kind who would fall for your sincerity. [This message has been edited by Corazon (edited 03-01-2000).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh...this one likes me very much.....I can relate well to it |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It counts... it counts! LOL And I love this! *S* |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"S" for "sincerity" AND "sarcasm"! Good writing! ~ Claire |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I loved this...yep, brought a smile to my face this morning!!! You're too much hun... I think I usually fall under M- for mislead!!!! Your sarcasm isn't lost on me...but that shows strength, and I do adore this peice of work!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
"Deny thy father and refuse thy name" or should it be. . . "Deny my love and stop playing games?" HEY!! That's pretty good. . . Corazon. . .I think that you may have opened up a poem from me based on this poem and your title. . . I really liked this one. . . and yes, I think that I can definitly color you "sarcastic"! --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
thanks all, funny how sarcasm can hold back the tears...must be a dam(n) of some sort...sigh sven, will look for your poem...great lines |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You made me laugh corazon. Made me think about my friend Jesse. I call him JesseNova the Hawaiian Cassanova. He has so many numbers in his little black book and I always wonder which one is his honey this week. James |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
You made me smile... I heard about an analogy of women and how they love and it stuck with me...this is how it went... Imagine a fish tank full of water but with a tiny drip leaking...all that water resembles the love for our man...when there is nothing but that tiny drop left, the love is still the same as the full tank but once that last drop has gone, so are we... I guess we women have a greater capacity for love and understanding...men hear facts, we give love until the final drop.. Btw, I think S should be for SOB in your case... HUSG< !signature--> I dropped a tear in the ocean when they find it,I will stop loving you... [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 03-01-2000).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
WHOO HOO! Romeos are everywhere! I had one too...Thanks for sharing this one! ~shadows dance by the light within~ |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Sometimes tears are the best weapon against pain. I found so many times Well written your poem The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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