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| Open Poetry #6 |
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Morning's Vineyards |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Morning's VineyardAs I walk between the heathers Down through the moistened mounds There arise, though slow and softly, Dawn's distant morning sounds The serenade of sun~birth Whispers low and o'er the sea And in the vineyards yonder Doth my love await for me He said to come at daybreak And now day is breaking free As I gather up my skirts and hasten, Through the lavender fields I flee With the thrum of intonation The larks and thrushes stir And murmur as my footfalls 'Pon the meadow's floor infer That my love is nigh and waiting In the vineyard just beyond Where the hedgerows part the grasses Past the drowsy olive pond And I wonder if they've seen him Strolling 'neath the emerald hues Through the vines of morning's vineyard To await his love's enthuse Breathing in the earth's aroma I sweep swiftly to the place Cast my eyes about the vineyard But see not my love's fine face Nor hear sounds of any running Nothing moves, my sight implies As I listen, still, in silence Something old within me cries And as I wake in dreamlight's dawning Soft, in sheets of heirloom lace Visions fresh, of morning's vineyards Pour vintage tears upon my face  Claire |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My God, woman ! This is gorgeous ! 'And as I wake in dreamlight's dawning Soft, in sheets of heirloom lace Visions fresh, of morning's vineyards Pour vintage tears upon my face' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
A beautiful beautiful poem Claire ... and I venture to say ... you'll have us all crying with this one  Rex}<{{{{o> |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I must say this - you are so cool. Your poetry blows me away at times. This one surely did. Such vivid imagery all through this piece...it floated, then crashed to tears at the end. Beautiful work, Claire. I stand in awe. Michael |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
So enjoyable to read. A lovely poem by a lovely woman. James |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
In early morning hours I cast my eyes on this and felt that such enchanting poem should have end in bliss But knowing also that love is not always free I think the ending suits the poem done by thee A tear went down my pillow as watch and read This truly is a poem to make my heart weep Your words are written so soft with such loving tenderness May god always protect thee and forever bless Your truly are a poet of great divine May the sun above there always, on thee shine ((((you)))) L. & .S.P The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
What a beautiful gift you have allowed me to partake of this morning, and a gift you do possess. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow, what a way with words you have. This is a beautiful vivid piece. The imagery and the tale you weave is just perfect. I stand in awe of your talent. I definately look forward to reading more poems by you. Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Can your poetry get any more beautiful? I don't think so until I read another. You take my breath away, Claire, with your wonderful talents. You are a pure joy to the world of poetry. Congratulations on this fine piece. Liz |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Your closing to this is ingeniuos...wonderfully written, but I've come to expect none less from you |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Clair, beautifully done, don't you just hate to wake from a good dream. Parker |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Thanks Marge...your reply caught me off guard and gave me a giggle. Rex..."Weep not, for thy heart is purity and sadness serves only to soil it." Didn't someone once say that, or did I make it up?! Anyway, thank you, Rex, for your sweet response. Michael...it takes one to know one, dearie. Thank you for your gracious review. It's wonderful to be able to share in poetry this way, and your work gives me such pleasure. James...thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Helmut...again your tender words humble me. Thank you. L. and S. P. (((you))) Mike...a gift is to share, as you share yours with all of us every day. Thank you for your words, and for the sharing. Melissa...thank you! And I look forward to reading your work as well. Lovely name you have Dear Liz...your response is always so encouraging. Knowing that you enjoyed this makes me smile. Hoot Owl...thank you, Ruth, as I know to expect grandness from your work as well. Yes, Parker, I do...I wrote this last night when I "should" have been dreaming! Thanks for reading. ~ Claire |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This captured me in a time before, where romance breathes and the sky crys and dreams are where the heart lives. Very beautiful poetry in you Claire. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Martie...what a beautiful thing to say! That was the feeling I was striving toward with this piece, and I'm so glad you shared your impressions with me. Thank you! ~ Claire [This message has been edited by Meadowmuse (edited 03-01-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Claire, this poem is simply amazing and perfect. It gives me major poety envy girlfriend(smile)...you write as graceful as a butterfly... I love your fairy symbol...beautiful like this poem and your heart! janet marie Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be... Jackson Browne *I miss you baby... I love you...always. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
What else can I say? You made this so vivid I could see you just as you described your self walking expectantly through the heather. Beautiful, Claire. |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
The pictures you paint with your words are beyond words of mine. I am breathless due to the beautiful, charming imagery in this poem. I cannot think of anything that is wonderful enough to describe this feeling i have after reading, no breathing, this poem. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Oh Meadowmuse....I envy your talent so much. You write with the grace and stunning beauty that I can only hope that I one day possess. This was absolutely gorgeous, as always. You continue to be one of my favorite poets. *Krista Knutson* "Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Too, too pretty to pass so quickly. It is morning ..... so BACK TO THE TOP for another walk through your vineyard. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Janet Marie...thank you for such a glowing response. So glad you enjoyed this. Balladeer...If my poem allows you to envision the scene, then I must consider it a success. Thank you, in earnest, for sharing your impressions with me. sonjes...thank you for that "breathtaking" review...I'm happy to know you enjoyed the feelings brought about by the reading. Alwye...what a sweet thing to say about...thank you! Marge...thank you for your kindness ... I think folks must have had enough of the vineyard though..lol. ~ Claire |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is going on my Meadowmuse favorite list, Claire - It's stunning...  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
welp, looks like I'm a little late to reply to this one, after everyone said the things I wanted to say. Just know that I loved it as much as everyone else. ~shadows dance by the light within~ |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
This is excellent Clair. I dont know what else I can say that someone else has not already stated. I will just say it again then, Excellent piece |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Another beautiful, spell binding, piece of writing, Claire. This is breathtaking!! Denise |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Claire, This poem reminded me of Emily Dickinson: heartfelt, beautiful, transcendental and rhythmic. The only thing that keeps it from fully being Dickinsonian is a lack of too many dashes! Believe me, I can definitely live with that. Great job. Mike |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Thanks everyone...I'm touched by such sweet responses, and so glad you all enjoyed reading this. ~ Claire |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
I had to read this again and again and like Marge said, back to the top you go! Gives me inspiration for yet another day. Chinese fortune cookie say: There are many unexpected & thrilling surprises in store for you. |
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