Open Poetry #6 |
I don't |
Spartacus Junior Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 13 |
I don't know how to say, All the things I feel, I do know for certain, That these feelings are real, I don't want to go to fast, I can't scare you away, My goal is to show you, That I need you to stay, I don't want to be foolish, But I'm scared to let you know, My feelings are so strong, And they continue to grow, I don't want to lose you, Even though you're not mine, I'm asking for your heart, All I need is a sign, I don't want my love, To be felt all in vain, Just tell me you love me, Then whisper my name. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is lovely! Your emotions are poured into this wonderful poem. good job.. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is sweet and pure. Just lovely. Thanx. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Spartacus! Very beautiful! Denise |
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RufffRyder Member
since 2000-02-25
Posts 143<------Over There------> |
Excellent job here with your feelings,wording and flow I would like to offer some advice on this one but I dont think that I qualify for that job ...lol Take care and good luck Spartacus |
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