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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Just a simple question with no easy answer, a quest in need of quenching, no thirst greater, searching for something, it never ceases, tastes like desire, which only increases. Something so familiar, nostalgic memories, fragments of songs from forgotten melodies, a whisper as you drift into sweet slumber, of billowing sheets as she slips under. Kiss that takes you down the tunnel of time, a touch that builds sighs in the sweet sublime, tears that gently fall onto parted lips, and melts into reunion of swaying hips. A breeze that caresses, begins to enthrall, a gentle rain upon skin starts to fall, a dream from which you never want to wake, one where you give as much as you take. © 2000 Corinne Bailey [This message has been edited by Corinne (edited 02-29-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Corinne! As always!! Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Corinne...I love the way this flows off the tongue  |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
May all your dreams be "suite".....nice job gal... |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This is beautiful Corinne. One of your best. Marina |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And the sweetest dreams always seem to be betrayed by an alarm clock yanking us back to reality. *S* Well done! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Denise, Toe, Hoot, Marina and Suthern! Corinne |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Hey Corrine, It's been quite awhile since I've taken the time to check in here. I knew as my first stop checking out a Corrine original would not disappoint. And I was right to count on you, Excellent work! Paul |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Corinne This has such a sensual sweet message, that I'm not sure how to respond. It is a dream from which I would never want to wake. zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Don't shake me, oh... ok. Parker [This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 02-29-2000).] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Wow, thanks, Paul! You are too kind! Parker, I won't be the one to wake you! Corinne |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Ah, but Corinne maybe you would be the only one that could. Parker [This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 03-01-2000).] |
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