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Corinne
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0 posted 2000-02-29 10:48 AM


Just a simple question with no easy answer,
a quest in need of quenching, no thirst greater,
searching for something, it never ceases,
tastes like desire, which only increases.

Something so familiar, nostalgic memories,
fragments of songs from forgotten melodies,
a whisper as you drift into sweet slumber,
of billowing sheets as she slips under.

Kiss that takes you down the tunnel of time,
a touch that builds sighs in the sweet sublime,
tears that gently fall onto parted lips,
and melts into reunion of swaying hips.

A breeze that caresses, begins to enthrall,
a gentle rain upon skin starts to fall,
a dream from which you never want to wake,
one where you give as much as you take.

© 2000 Corinne Bailey



[This message has been edited by Corinne (edited 02-29-2000).]

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-02-29 10:53 AM


This is beautiful, Corinne! As always!!

Denise

hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 2000-02-29 11:04 AM


Corinne...I love the way this flows off the tongue  
Toerag
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3 posted 2000-02-29 11:05 AM


May all your dreams be "suite".....nice job gal...
Marina
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4 posted 2000-02-29 11:14 AM


This is beautiful Corinne.  One of your best.

Marina

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5 posted 2000-02-29 11:29 AM


And the sweetest dreams always seem to be betrayed by an alarm clock yanking us back to reality. *S* Well done!
Corinne
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6 posted 2000-02-29 11:44 AM


Thank you, Denise, Toe, Hoot, Marina and Suthern!

Corinne

Paul Hoekman
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7 posted 2000-02-29 02:55 PM


Hey Corrine,
It's been quite awhile since I've taken the time to check in here. I knew as my first stop checking out a Corrine original would
not disappoint. And I was right to count on you, Excellent work!     Paul

Parker
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8 posted 2000-02-29 05:09 PM


Corinne
This has such a sensual sweet message,
that I'm not sure how to respond.
It is a dream from which I would never want to wake.
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Don't shake me, oh... ok.

Parker  


[This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 02-29-2000).]

Corinne
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9 posted 2000-02-29 07:25 PM


Wow, thanks, Paul!  You are too kind!

Parker, I won't be the one to wake you!


Corinne

Parker
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10 posted 2000-02-29 10:08 PM


Ah, but Corinne maybe you would be the only one that could.

Parker

[This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 03-01-2000).]

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