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vandana
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0 posted 2000-02-28 10:48 AM



Will you love like before,
love me ,
never let me go,
Love is still there,
Don't wait till tomorrow comes,
Love me for drozen times,
Don't stop,
I have made wishes for us,
hope you've made them too,
Love me
Won't you love me,
love me like a flower,
As a flower grows each day,
Never let me go,
I love you,
I don't know
why I love you,
But I love you,
No mater what,
love is like a star
that shines at night,
When the time is right for us,
Love me,
Will you hold me
If I fall apart,
Will you call my name,
when the love remains the same,
Love me,
won't you touch me?
Love me like you used to before,
Please love me,
I need your love tonight
Love me,



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Denise
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1 posted 2000-02-28 11:30 AM


Beautiful, Vandana!  

Denise

Danny Holloway
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2 posted 2000-03-01 12:09 PM


Such emotional pleading in this piece.
"love me like you used to before"
Must be a special person.
Nice piece!

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-03-02 12:21 PM


VanDana~
This is lovely, hon.

'Will you call my name,
when the love remains the same'

I trust he will call your name.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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