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Fire and Desire
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Fire and Desire |
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KRex New Member
since 2000-02-27
Posts 6 |
For the first time I feel something inside Refusing to go away Eternal A strong, passionate feeling Needing you always near Denying nothing Deep wells of love Ever plauging me Silent nights of wondering If this is meant to be Rescue me from these Everlasting dreams of you |
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KRex New Member
since 2000-02-27
Posts 6 |
dman, your a good poet |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Excelent poem! I especially love the first stanza... it has some real emotion in it. Everlasting dreams are a wonderful thing... Sometimes it is better to stay within them. I will look forward to reading more of your poetry! Welcome! [This message has been edited by Dawn Eclipse (edited 02-27-2000).] |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Great poem , Very well done, I enjoyed it alot  welcome to passions |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Welcome to Passions... Nice work. 'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Soleil Member
since 1999-06-12
Posts 113 |
First poem I pulled up, I liked it, but I probably would have framed these feelings in a more structured form. |
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Manchester Junior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 15 |
Love springs eternal. But you almost seem to question it. Great poem. ----------<--@ |
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