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Where do I go from here?
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Where do I go from here? |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Where do I go from here, I say, do I continue to strive, or walk away? I've worked so hard, and given my all. I'm tired, and worn, and starting to fall. My focus has gone, and I'm starting to feel, that the time that I've given, is not a good deal. I've seen things, I never thought that I would, I've learned to handle the things that I could. I'm scared to go off on my own, I depend alot on what you've shown. My life has changed in every sense. This one more aspect knocks my balance. Where do I go from here, I say, do I continue to strive, or walk away? |
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RufffRyder Member
since 2000-02-25
Posts 143<------Over There------> |
Continue to move forward and when your feeling like you can`t give anymore,look into your heart and you`ll find the strength. Sad,yet well said read  |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Ruffryder, You're right, I'm surprised at how many times I've thought I couldn't continue, and yet I always do! Thanks for the reply! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~Tulip *cheers* to you! just be recongnizing that there are many challenges in life is half the battle. Look within your heart and soul and you will realize you have many answers. And when the tough gets going, you'll be surprised for sure how far you can go. And the days you still feel as though you cant go on, trust in the Lord or whatever faith you have, but most importantly believe in yourself amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Aimster, Thank you. I do believe in myself, but I'm very tired and worn out. I wonder how I continue to go on sometimes... |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
I felt your emotions in your well crafted words. The time you gave was no waste-don't make a decision in haste; Refocus and consider yourself-when balanced, look out for yourself. Really Good Alle'Cram |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great poem, Tulip! Very well written. Denise |
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Miss.Queeny Junior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 22 |
Tulip ( great name ) A lovely poem which is very honest and emotional. Remember that no-one makes you, and be dependent or no-one. Love, Q xxx |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Alle', I made a very haste decision, but one I knew was the "right" decision. Denise, Thank you, as always... Miss Queeny, I'm standing alone right now, but my loyalty is in the right place. I've just never felt so alone standing for what I believe in. Just so you all know, this has to do with work, not a relationship. |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
Keep on writing. Keep on fighting. A fantastic poem....I'll be looking out for more of your work.  < !signature-->I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. [This message has been edited by mete out (edited 03-02-2000).] |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
FULL-SPEED AHEAD! This is a very sad poem, Tulip, but it sounds as though you have the answer already...you keep moving forward! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Tulip, a wonderful poem..... I would say always go forward, and no matter what never give in. Parker |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tulip~ believe in yourself and your own abilities!You'll do great! -SEA |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Good poem, Tulip. Standing up for what one believes and knows to be right is often such a challenge, but one of integrity and strength, and you can take comfort in knowing you have both. ~ Claire |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Mete, Thank you. JF, I think I should be slowing down a bit...it's getting shaky going full force.. but I will move forward. Haleyja, I won't budge an inch on this one. Thank you! Sea, Thank you, I always apprecieate what you have to say. Meadow, It's a challenge I never expected, only making things more difficult. You think you have all you can handle, and boom, something else happens!!! |
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