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Response ti PdV's challenge
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Response ti PdV's challenge |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
My love is here, My love is true. There is no one, In my heart but you. I want to spend, My whole life through. To share all things, That come, with you. I'd give my heart, My soul and life. To save your heart, From any strife. I'll be for you, All you are for me. Because of you, I've been set free. To have, to hold, Throught thick and thin. I make these vows, As life begins. I will be here, By your side. Until death does end, This life long ride. Forever yours, And yours alone. I make this vow, My heart is shown. I wish to be, Within your life. Beside you ever, As your wife. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Very touching! But who's the lucky guy? BTW - my challenge is posted in Announcements...  [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 02-26-2000).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Well Marilyn, who is it? Care to tell? Great poem my friend!  |
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RufffRyder Member
since 2000-02-25
Posts 143<------Over There------> |
Now THAT`S what TRUE LOVE is all about!!! Thank`s for the breath of FRESH AIR. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Ah, Marilyn.....but don't beat around the bush. Say what you mean !  Wonderful poem, my girl. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Marilyn ... I'm so happy for you ... Wow!!! Please, fill us in |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Ah guys...  I guess my artistic talent shone through on this one..lol. There is no man in my life (not a real life one anyway).Sharon posted a challenge and I decided to give it a go. If I were to ask someone to marry me on the 29th of Feb. this is how I would do it. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marilyn~ Had 'em going there gal ! This was lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Well if it were a real person, I'd say this one way heck of a way to ask someone! <*\\\>< There's only two ways you can go... One way you can save your riches, And the other will save your soul. Rich Mullins |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
There's nothing more a man could ask for. Beautiful poem, Marilyn. Michael |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
hey, can't think of a better way |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
All i can say Beautiful the poem that is And lucky the guy whoever it is Nice poem The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Way to go, Marilyn - Go for it - He'll be lucky to have you...  |
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Grandma Jo Member
since 2000-01-02
Posts 51 |
Whoever it will be, he will be a very LUCKY man indeed! Good stuff Marilyn. |
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