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Dark Angel
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0 posted 2000-02-26 05:58 AM


Moonbeams.

Sparkle in your eyes
shimmer boundlessly
Illuminated by faint twilight
twinkling endlessly.

Daisy trails lead us
through infinite space
Watching time go by
and our past erase.

Moonbeams
there for you and for me
Shedding lustre
ever so dreamily
Our hearts shine and
our souls divine.

Oh and lay me down
read to me the poetry
Of our love passionately
continuously.

Let live the reality
the scene's of my mind
You and me
forever entwined.


Dark Angel
   2000



 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



© Copyright 2000 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
christies heart
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1 posted 2000-02-26 06:05 AM


Awsome!!!!

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Poet deVine
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2 posted 2000-02-26 06:36 AM


Absolutely lovely! Such imagery... this is one of your best DA!!
Parker
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3 posted 2000-02-26 10:22 AM


Dark Angel, this is a wonderful piece, it sparkles in the moonlight.

Parker

Mike
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4 posted 2000-02-26 10:30 AM


Wonderfully done.  Enjoyed muchly.
Dark Angel
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5 posted 2000-02-26 04:08 PM


Christies heart, thank you!  
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Sharon, thank you so very much for your lovely compliment!  
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Halejya, thank you for your lovely reply  
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Thank you Mike, glad you enjoyed it.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 2000-02-26 06:41 PM


Absolutely beautiful....may your nights always be filled with moonbeams  
Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2000-02-26 06:56 PM


DarkAngel~

How beautiful .....

'Let live the reality
the scene's of my mind
You and me
forever entwined.'

How very beautiful.
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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WhtDove
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8 posted 2000-02-26 08:42 PM


DA this was perfectly beautiful! Woohoo girl!
Janet Marie
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9 posted 2000-02-26 09:08 PM


Oh and lay me down
read to me the poetry
Of our love passionately
continuously.

Let live the reality
the scene's of my mind
You and me
forever entwined.

ooh I love this mystical, sensual poem..very nice...take care, janet marie



 ...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*


Alwye
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10 posted 2000-02-26 10:57 PM


Beautiful work....your words sparkle within my mind.  Impressive work.  

 *Krista Knutson*

"Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~


Michael
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11 posted 2000-02-27 01:23 AM


Wow...what a soft, sweet poem.  This is so beautiful.  *wistful sighs*  


Michael

Dark Angel
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12 posted 2000-02-27 06:18 AM


Ruth hun, Thank you so very much.  
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Marge, thank you for your lovely reply  
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Angel, Thanks sweetie!!  
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Janet Marie, thank you so very much!  
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Alwye, thank you!!  
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Michael, thank you!!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Moonshine
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13 posted 2000-02-27 08:30 AM


WOW DA - this is a beautiful piece of writing. Well done.
Sven
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14 posted 2000-02-27 03:02 PM


DA. . . you have always known how settings like this can get to me. .. very beautiful. . . very wonderful. ..

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Martie
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15 posted 2000-02-27 04:06 PM


This is sooo beautiful!
Dark Angel
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16 posted 2000-02-27 09:37 PM


Moonshine, thank you, so glad you liked it!
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Sven, thank you very much.  
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Martie, thank you for yor lovely reply.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Denise
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17 posted 2000-02-27 10:19 PM


This is beautiful, Dark Angel!  

Denise

Elizabeth Santos
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18 posted 2000-02-28 07:28 AM


The angel casts another moonbeam on a page of poetry.
How lovely
Liz

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