Open Poetry #6 |
~Always with me~ |
tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
I wonder what you're up to I wonder where you are I wonder if that's you tonight That shiny bright new star I think about you constant My thoughts often drift to you Drifting to your loving face and your eyes of blue Always in my heart never too far away Endlessly a part of me Always there to stay For my nan the most loving and gentle person I've ever known [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 02-25-2000).] |
||
© Copyright 2000 Tracie Maree Collis - All Rights Reserved | |||
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
tracie...this is a sweet and beautiful tribute... one of several in here tonite...the stars sparkle with a special glow... when we have loved ones shining them down on us. take care, janet marie ...there are places inside all our souls... that have never been touched... there are places inside our hearts... that need to be loved this much... Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
||
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ This is very, very sweet. Your Nan will love it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
RufffRyder Member
since 2000-02-25
Posts 143<------Over There------> |
The star`s that shine high above Shine brighter with each passing of the one`s we love, They light the darkness from within the sky, While all the time watching over you and I. This is indeed a beautiful tribute. Nice Read tracie |
||
tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Janet marie thanks for reading. I wrote this for my dads mum she died 4 years ago and I still miss her. My other nan only died last year and they were both a big part of my life...but i do believe that they are up there shining down their love upon me here on earth. |
||
tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
~Marge~ thanks for reading as you often do I appreciate it... Rufffryder thanks for the lovely poetic reply it was lovely |
||
hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
What a lovely tribute to your Grandmother |
||
CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
This is a lovely poem you did a great job! |
||
Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Beautiful tribute tracie - what a lucky man he is to have you. michael |
||
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nice poem! |
||
tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Ruth, CC, Michael and Vandana I thank you all for reading this post. My grandmothers were two of the most special poeple in my life and I know that if anyone could shine as stars in the sky at night they would. |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |