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tracie66
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0 posted 2000-02-25 08:24 PM







I wonder what you're up to
I wonder where you are

I wonder if that's you tonight
That shiny bright new star

I think about you constant
My thoughts often drift to you
Drifting to your loving face
and your eyes of blue

Always in my heart
never too far away
Endlessly a part of me
Always there to stay

For my nan
the most loving and gentle person I've
ever known


[This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 02-25-2000).]

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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2000-02-25 09:52 PM


tracie...this is a sweet and beautiful tribute... one of several in here tonite...the stars sparkle with a special glow... when we have loved ones shining them down on us.
take care, janet marie

 ...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*


Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-02-25 10:08 PM


Tracie~
This is very, very sweet.
Your Nan will love it.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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RufffRyder
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3 posted 2000-02-25 10:49 PM


The star`s that shine high above
Shine brighter with each passing
of the one`s we love,
They light the darkness
from within the sky,
While all the time watching over
you and I.

This is indeed a beautiful tribute.
Nice Read tracie


tracie66
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4 posted 2000-02-26 01:32 AM


Janet marie thanks for reading. I wrote this for my dads mum she died 4 years ago and I still miss her. My other nan only died last year and they were both a big part of my life...but i do believe that they are up there shining down their love upon me here on earth.
tracie66
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5 posted 2000-02-26 01:35 AM


~Marge~ thanks for reading as you often do I appreciate it...
Rufffryder thanks for the lovely poetic reply it was lovely    

hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 2000-02-26 02:31 AM


What a lovely tribute to your Grandmother  
CrazyChick
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7 posted 2000-02-26 03:37 AM


This is a lovely poem
you did a great job!          

Michael
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8 posted 2000-02-26 03:45 AM


Beautiful tribute tracie - what a lucky man he is to have you.


michael

vandana
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9 posted 2000-02-26 07:09 PM


Nice poem!
tracie66
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10 posted 2000-02-26 07:17 PM


Ruth, CC, Michael and Vandana I thank you all for reading this post. My grandmothers were two of the most special poeple in my life and I know that if anyone could shine as stars in the sky at night they would.  
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