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sheltering in the eye of the storm |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom 
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When you are in love < !signature-->how does it leave you feeling eyes smiling body dancing lost in thought mind reeling Always smiling always laughing constantly giving and sharing touching, reaching out flowering, extending the caring When you are in love does your world seem right find yourself daydreaming feeling the fire in you ignite Resenting time that takes you away watching the hands turn on the clock at a loss for words that convey that between you, you are key and lock When you are in love you feel your partner's pain and sorrow as though it were your own working together to resolve it all tomorrow Sharing thoughts like missiles find their target locked on tight the course has now been set you're sheltering in the eye of the storm There's no going back - the two of you have met! When you are in love - is that how you feel? Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 01-13-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yep! I'd say that this a very good description! Beautiful poem, Cindy!  Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Yep that about sums it up!! Wonderful RG Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
The poet who wrote this has been in love. And you're right, once there, it's too late. A lovely poem about a lovely feeling Excellent. Liz |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Nice poem, Rainbowgirl! Nathan |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RainbowGirl- You've been peeking at my DIARY ! Awesome thoughts lady. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Denise: Well, I could have written pages...LOL HUGS Isis: Now if only love+love=love...*g* HUGS Elizabeth: Am I allowed to take the 5th?.. HUGS Nate Dogg: Thank you.. HUGS Marge: Inspiration is the key....is it one of those lovely old 5 year diaries with the golden lock?.. ..Faithfully I used to lock mine but why I don't know, so easy to break into...LOLHUSG Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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Grandma Jo Member
since 2000-01-02
Posts 51 |
Seems like someone's in love. Yes, it is like all this and more. This is lovely! |
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Rus Bowden Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 139 |
Hi RainbowGirl, I love how the question makes it seem as a first love, or a confirmation of loves existence in your speaker. Wonderful to read. Rus |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Grandma Jo: I've always been in love - with life.. HUGS Rus: Clever..*g* But there's only one way to know you're in love: when you don't question how you feel - to quote, played on the soul, no saxophone! HUGS < !signature--> Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 01-13-2000).] |
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Baby Blue New Member
since 2000-01-12
Posts 7 |
What a wonderful poem! They way you fit the words together are amazing. You have perfectly described the way I feel about my "love". I could never get it out on words, but you have already accomplished that. Beautiful work. Baby Blue * He became what he hated, But he loved what he became, And he hated the fact that he loved it. |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
Beautiful poem sweetheart ... and ROFL @ you taking the 5th ... hey, don't steal my lines will ya ? ... |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
To answer your question Rainbow, yep, that's the feeling! Loved the poem!Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Baby Blue: Thank you...I could have written pages on it but you have to stop somehwere..LOL...Thank you. HUGS JTF: ROFL, hey, they're universal lines, can't be stolen...*g* HUSG Devina: Thanks...*g* HUGS Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
beautifuuly written. If only we could hold that euforia of new love and spread it out over time. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Yes to your question Rainbow.... You've expressed the feeling so beautifully.. A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Artur Hawkwing Member
since 1999-06-30
Posts 444USA |
I can't tell, I'm still young. It speaks more of marriage-type kind of love, I suppose. Half of it speaks true though. You said: When you are in love does your world seem right find yourself daydreaming feeling the fire in you ignite I couldn't agree any more! Beautiful, beautiful poem that speaks directly. [This message has been edited by Artur Hawkwing (edited 01-15-2000).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Rainbow,yep this is the feeling, Excellent my dear friend!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
When you're in love.... your heart feels better... and your body and soul feel better as well.... Nice one, RG... |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Spiked: You can keep it...if you're prepared to make loving fun as well as listening, sharing, being there and oh dear, best I stop now before I write a novel...but it takes two or else it falls apart.. HUGS Pepper: Tis a lovely feeling.. HUSG Arthur: Interesting thought about it seeming like a marriage..but you're right, that's how marriage should be.. HUGS DA: Thanks sweetheart.. HUSG Nan: Yep, medicine for the heart and soul.. All I need is the prescription filling..*g*HUSG Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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catslair Junior Member
since 2000-01-16
Posts 48 |
well i am new.......and in many ways old.........what i here is the thought of love......and am so glad if you have found something lasting like that.......my utmost blesings to you...for the words are warming to say the least.......... |
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