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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Hidden deep inside the mind Are memories of a different time. They take me somewhere far away. Back to a place of a better day. Where you could safely walk the street. Or talk to strangers that you meet. Life moved at a slower pace. Nothing like today's rat race. I often wonder where time's gone. It spins around and then moves on. Leaving behind warm memories To come and visit, when you please. [This message has been edited by Eloise (edited 01-02-2000).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Eloise, I liked the thoughts behind this one. Check your e-mail  |
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mama duck Junior Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 41Northern California |
Eloise, Nice poem. Those of us with memories of different times, ones where the world seemed safer and more friendly are the lucky ones. Think of those that have never really known a different world. Warm memories are treasures, indeed. Chris |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Beautiful Eloise!! Wonderful poem and the flow was excellent! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Eloise I like your poetry It's wonderful Liz |
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Tamera Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 121 |
We always do have memories to look back on...great poem! Tamera |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
The comforting memories of a gentle time...so heartfelt and well written. We often rely on these memories to keep us connected to the who of who we are, I think. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
well written poem, and I can't agree more! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Ruth, a special thank you! MD and Echo, thank you. Yes we are fortunate to have those memories.  Elizabeth, I appreciate that. I'm glad that you enjoy my poetry as I do yours, so much. Thank you.  Appreciate the comments Tamera and devina. Meadowmuse I agree thanks. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I must admit - I have to remind myself to lock my doors behind me.... I grew up not having to be concerned about such trivialities.... Nice thoughts here...  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I remember those days, too. Wonderful poem, Eloise! Denise |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ah....those were the days! Excellent poem with a timely reminder. Thank you. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Nan, Denise, and PVD thank you. Yes those were the days. I, too, remember them well. PVD, your welcome and thank you. I received your email and I did like it. |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Can't say I remember those days, or maybe I was just in a daze. Warm memories do warm up the heart.  |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Very well done! I can remember those days too, when you could stay out late and not have to worry! Some day it will be like that again! Treasure the memories! <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Beautiful poem. |
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