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Corey Collier
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since 2000-01-13
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0 posted 2000-01-13 04:12 AM


                    Would You?

Would you embrace me when I cry?
Would you chase me if I ran away?
Would you protect me from harm?
Would you tell me to listen to myself?
Would you wipe the tears if I didn't want to?
Would you sit by my side if I was sick?

Would you come to my funeral and tell them you love me and that I was yours for a moment in time....

When I Die

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Michael
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1 posted 2000-01-13 04:53 AM


Welcome to Passions, Corey.  This is an intriguing work.  I must ask though, who is the "them" in your final sentence?  Not that it's any of my business, just curious.


Michael

Denise
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2 posted 2000-01-13 10:37 AM


We all need someone who would that for us, huh? Nice poem!  

 Denise


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