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Enotneicna
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since 1999-06-06
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Oakland, Or, USA

0 posted 2000-01-12 07:12 PM



For too long, vision has been clouded
For too long, emotions have been pent up.
Allowing too many negatives to build.
For too long the flood gates have held back peace.
Lives and Loves have been broken,
Homes and dreams have been crushed to dust;
And blown to the four directions.
Fear and doubt have been allowed free reign
Hope and promise have been held under foot.

But no longer

The time has come to see past everything.
To feel more than ever thought possible.
The time has come to open the flood-gates,
And let the peace cascade down.
Over lives and loves,
Homes and dreams.
To wash away fear and doubt,
And leave behind;
Hope and promise
And new beginnings for us all.

© Copyright 2000 Sharon Lee Wilcox (Enotneicna) - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-01-12 07:49 PM


Wow! It sure is time! Fabulous poem with a fabulous message! Well done!

 Denise


Enotneicna
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2 posted 2000-01-14 04:24 AM


Thanks!! Hope it gets a few more readings!

[This message has been edited by Enotneicna (edited 01-14-2000).]

devina
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3 posted 2000-01-14 05:30 AM


A beautiful message to us all...very nicely written!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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4 posted 2000-01-14 07:03 AM


O'Siyo-

Many moons have passed,
many yet to come ...
Peace to all.

~*Marge*~

 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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5 posted 2000-01-14 07:07 AM


This is a great note to start off the millennium
Thanks
Liz

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