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cougaryouth
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 25


0 posted 2000-01-12 06:59 PM


Anxiety is high
doubts are set
what ifs have been thought
but still you are shy

Decisions are made
fellings are hurt
insults are said
and paths have been laid

And time rolls on
and you learn new things
your body gets older
and you lose romance
but you gain new freinds
and your mind gets wiser
it goes so fast
but time rolls on

you meet the one
but you hesitate
and after sometime
you know shes the one
you face new problems
and you think you should run
but you stick around because the world scares you
to live all alone
without the ones you love

And time rolls on
and you learn new things
your body gets older
and you lose romance
but you gain new freinds
and your mind gets wiser
it goes so fast
but time rolls on



[This message has been edited by cougaryouth (edited 01-12-2000).]

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devina
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539
Cali
1 posted 2000-01-12 07:02 PM


Very true thoughts here, I don't think I've had the chance to Welcome you..so Welcome!!   Your poem was well said in it's simplicity...I like!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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