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Falling into the Stars in Daylight
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Falling into the Stars in Daylight |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Falling into the Stars in Daylight Falling into the stars in daylight I hold my skin knowing my heart is too open my surface cannot hold keep it safe from this giant leap that questions who I am Still I would jump across this mote of doubt leap into this intimate meaning give spur to the pounding race across the plain in search of destiny if I could but know an answer that survives the tumbling This dangling has me drenched breathe me a purpose that keeps me mighty in ropes of words for I am falling into the stars in daylight In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, what a wonderful poem, I am impressed. *L* Sy |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
I enjoyed your poem very much, wonderfully done. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Martie, Another day, another gem Liz |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Martie! Always a pleasure, it is, to read your gems!  Denise |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy-I am honored that you would be impressed by my poem Mike-thank you so much. Your poems are wonderful. Liz-A gem is a precious word from you Denise-thank you for the read as always you are so sweet. |
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