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It's Written in the Stars
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It's Written in the Stars |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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It's Written in the Stars So exquisite was our precious love I trembled from within Fearing it would blow away With ever changing wind So intangible and fragile Are the wings of heart's own bliss He calmed my fears one starlit night With a gentle kiss And then he took me by the hand And pointed up above And there in splendid radiance Was written all our love For every single tender kiss A single star he placed And spelled our love across the sky In soft poetic grace Our twinkling constellations Filled the galaxy And shown upon the universe For all eternity Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 01-12-2000).] |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Simply lovely you made me float for a moment I feel such peace in this piece. Earthman |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Truly exquisite, Elizabeth!  It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Elizabeth, this is simply beautiful athough that word can not do justice to the poem  |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
There is no word to describe how wonderful this poem is Liz, So sweet and Beautiful , I love your work |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, You are so talented I cannot say enough, You have written a huricane and I a simple puff. If you don't mind I'll keep this one, For my heart and mind as a captive sun. Love Sy |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Absolutely beautiful, Liz! A poem that truly brings a warm smile. Well done! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Me likes poems that flow so smoothly not from the tongue but rather from the heart... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Paul, Poetry does make you float, kind of like a crystal snowflake Thanks, Liz Coroline. I love that word "Exquisite" There is no other that says what it says, and so I use it sparingly in my verses, like the one above Thank you Liz Hoot, Yes, this would be beautiful in the eyes of a romantic Thanks, Liz Whiskey, Seems you describe yourself Thank you Liz Sy, Thank you for your words of praise To your poetic heights I never raise But write my verses in pure elation Thanks to your dear inspiration Liz Sally, You are so kind. Thanks Liz Mike, From the heart come the sweetest songs Thank you Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth, my friend- So very pretty. Heartfelt. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Very beautiful indeed Liz !! Your writing shines as brightly as those stars....... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge and Pepper, two star gazers if I ever saw one. Thank you, dear friends Liz |
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Sonny Junior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 29Schenectady, NY, USA |
your poetry has become my own cosmology!!!!! Sonny |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Not even Toerag can think of anything smartass to write about this one Lizzie...this is fantastic kid.... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sonny, What a sweet remark, Thank you Liz Toe, I have never known you at a loss for words that make me laugh, so this exposes your tender loving side Thanks, Liz |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Love and the stars - They do walk hand in hand, don't they? - Very nice Elizabeth... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is absolutely lovely, Elizabeth!!! *S* Or maybe my first thought said it better... "Wow!" *G* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I am amazed by the brilliance that shines from you heart Liz. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Wow! Wow! Wow! Elizabeth, your beautiful poem stands out like the North Star! Nathan |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yet another shining example of your talent, Elizabeth! Very very nice! Denise |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you all, Nan, Martie, Suthrn, Nate and Denise. It seems everybody loves the stars, and I appreciate all of your comments Liz |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Easy to read and flowing so well The poem took me into its spell Thank you , very nice The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
A lovely poem, Liz. Very touching. Michael |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I can only nod my head in agreement at every comment |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I love the way your poems tell such a beautiful story....you've done it again...made me say wow that is Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Baby Blue New Member
since 2000-01-12
Posts 7 |
What a wonderful poem Elizabeth. It has set examples to me that there could be "Happy Poems", somehow, I just can't get those happy feelings out. But with your poem, I am sure going to try. Thank you for the encouragement. Good Luck to you, Baby Blue |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Elizabeth, when I saw the title, I just HAD to read the poem. For a love that's written in the stars! Wonderful piece. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I appreciated all of your comments. Seems there are a lot of people around here with stars in their eyes. Aren't the heavens wonderful, though? Liz |
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CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
I love to read your work! Its beautiful!!!!! |
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Roger Leewright Junior Member
since 1999-09-25
Posts 28Beaverton, OR.USA |
Well Liz U did it to me again, this is such a wonderful poem and you have such a beautiful way of putting into words the feeling of the emotions. Thanks I always enjoy your work |
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Rus Bowden Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 139 |
Oh Liz, This is a beautiful love scene. Wonderful night sky. Oh what love can do! Rus |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Crazy chick Thank you for the sweet comment Liz Roger, What a nice thing to say, I'm glad you liked the poem Liz |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Elizabeth, another fine poem penned. Excellent, to say the least.  Claire |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Love is so precious like that....  ~ElizabethDreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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