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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Rays Of Golden Love I danced a song in the early light of dawn kissing the dew away grasping for the stars. Wind swept whispers echoing softly off the moon gently caressing the earth below giving rhythm to the breeze. Peeking around fluffy forms of mist filled vaporous mounds reaching to warm the atmosphere with rays of golden love. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ahhhhh...this is so beautiful, Gloria! Always a pleasure to read your work!  Denise |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Beautiful poem Lost Dreamer! Nathan |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
dsnyder: Thank-you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Nate Dogg: Thank-you so much I am sorry it took me so long to reply back, to tell you the truth I forgot about this poem then found this paper that I penned it on, and iwas not sure if I had even posted it, so I did a search to see if I did and alas here it was with two kind responses from two very kind people. Thank-you both again. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I can't believe I missed this one ! It sounds like a song and makes me feel like dancing. Beautiful poem Gloria! |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Hi, just read your poem and found it so delicate and refreshing. Your unique use of words stand out in this poem, different than most appearing in this forum. Nice! D |
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