Open Poetry #5 |
Is it You? Speak to Me. **Repost** |
Sunshine
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Oh my poetic visionary and lover most extraordinaire could I be your loved one, would I even compare to those you’ve loved and lusted in your life’s long-ago or would you rather me not even begin to know? Tho I cannot give you my all and everything, just my entire being for all of its earthly worth, for when I read your words of giving and love I feel as if I’ve been newly and lustily birthed. You open all my senses, I feel as if you’re the sun by entering my private areas, those I’ve kept for The One. Is it you? Are my dreams encompassed in your speech of poetry and prose and rhymes that for me beseech? Not looking for this feeling, your words have left me reeling, I hesitate to speak for my knees they have gone weak. Is it you? Are you the one tho not sought have brought to me your earthly love that I did not seek? Or are you just a dream that I’ve webbed so fine and your words are spirits whispering through the pines as I lay here ‘neath nature’s window, alone but not despaired for at least your words have whispered that which I would share. 13 August, 1999 ©KRJ Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Denise
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This is wonderful, Sunshine! I'm glad you reposted it! This one sure is passionate! Denise |
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Sunshine
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Thank you, Denise. Your words are a panacea to my muse... Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
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Poetry can be so very seductive. Nicely crafted poem, Sunshine. Claire |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
I looked for words in which I shall reply Your poem touched me and I know the reason why The flow of passion is clearly here to see To describe Love...well done has thee I can read a second time And hear the weeping sound of pine This poem deserves the word "divine" < !signature--> The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. [This message has been edited by HelmutB (edited 01-12-2000).] |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Sunshine: This speaks to me so well.. HUGS Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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Sunshine
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Claire, Helmut, Rainbow, thank you all for reading. I truly enjoy whatever responses my pieces illicit, as illustrated in Helmut's response. Thank you! Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I don't remember this one, glad you reposted...very nice |
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Sunshine
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Thank you Hoot, I am glad you enjoyed this one. Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I missed this one too Sunshine... Passionate indeed! Wonderful work..... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Nan
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Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This was great when you first posted, and equally as wonderful now.... I'm happy to see your work anytime... |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
nicely done gal....I think it's "bettered" with age.... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I love poetry written with passion And this is just such a poem Wonderful Liz |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I don't remember this one, Sunshine... so I'm very glad you reposted it! It's lovely... haunting... and the internal rhymes add to the reading pleasure! Well done! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Whoa ! Love it ! Go Sunshine ! Very well done, gal. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunshine
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I don't know why I wasn't notified that I had so many responses to this, but thank you, all, for reading, and I am so very glad that you have enjoyed this reposting. This one "speaks" to me, and I'm glad it does to you, too! Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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