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my last one...thanks everyone
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my last one...thanks everyone |
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cokey_95 Junior Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 35 |
I see the scars on my arm and wrists, Mere constant reminders of who I was and still am A lonely person, no where to turn All alone, her soul left to burn Crying inside, Those silent tears, The ones she herself refuses to hear Everyone is deaf to her cries, She is numb to the pain Consumed by the maddness, The maddness she tries desperately to hide All alone, with no one to confide "It isn't fair," she screams, realizing she is one of few chosen to feel pain with such depth She's sinking in the fear, she's drowning in the pain, maybe someone will save her once again But maybe not, maybe this is it, maybe this time is the end. She gets down on her knees and prays to God for the strength and the will to go on With every passing day she hopes her prayers are answered For she fears what will be if they are ignored I look at the scars and cry, for they are me with the strength not to hide |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so very sad and well written. You seem to have a great talent for writing. Sometimes writing is the best therepy for the pain that we feel. You have expressed yourself very well in this. Does the title mean that you won't be posting here anymore? I hope it doesn't mean that. I think if you stick around here you will be very glad that you did!  Denise |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Why is it the last one?...A bit worrying with the content, hope you're ok, are you? HUGS Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You are not alone here at Passions. I hope to see some more of your writing, for you are certainly talented. I wouldn't look to hard at the scars. There are so many other things to see. Raise your head once in a while to look at the stars, you will be amazed at the tranquility such a sight can bring to the spirit. Keep writing, Cokey A big Hug, Liz |
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