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patchoulipumpkin Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 196Bermuda |
Me too Have you ever been underwater Holding your breath for so long That you think you’re going to burst But just before you do You pull for the surface And at what seems like the last minute You take in a breath. So that you think you have saved yourself From drowning Have you? Yeh, me too! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Patch, I've done that but its been quite a while ago. Enjoyed the read. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Once or twice - though I used to have a dreadful dream about being in a pool that suddenly got covered over by polythene - THAT was awful! Well done - like your style. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yep, I've done that too, but like, Sy, it was many years ago! Horrible nightmare, Severn! Scarey! Denise |
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Quiet Lightning Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 56 |
I'd stay in the shallow water so I wouldn't drown.Plus I can swim. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Patch - Definitely .... and hasn't been that long ago ! LOL ! Nice to know we're all a little nuts ! SEYMOUR ????? YOU???? Go figure ! |
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